Comments on: Air Feeds Fire

By: Sockren

Sockren — Wed, 18 May 2011 04:30:04 +0000

Hey Branch! Long time, no text! We’ve reopened up Touka Koukan (http://toukakoukan.com) again (I know, blast from the past). It got a totally new makeover!

Anyway, is there anyway you could drop me an e-mail? You’ve written some works since we last talked and I was wondering if there was any chance we could share some of your new work with our readers.

By: Glow

Glow — Wed, 09 Feb 2011 20:54:15 +0000

your an amazing writer!

By: Branch

Branch — Tue, 18 May 2010 17:18:52 +0000

Thanks! It’s been a while since I revisited FMA, but it still has a special place in my fannish heart.

By: Haganeno8

Haganeno8 — Tue, 18 May 2010 06:46:28 +0000

good job with Ed and Roy! I’ve been looking for some new fodder for my obsession and I’m glad I stumbled onto this. Thank you!

By: Branch

Branch — Sat, 28 Nov 2009 19:22:05 +0000

You’re entirely welcome, and thank you so much!

By: Alexa

Alexa — Sat, 28 Nov 2009 18:53:27 +0000

This was absolutely wonderful. Thank you.

By: Branch

Branch — Sun, 12 Jul 2009 15:27:31 +0000

Thank you! This was the first FMA fic I wrote, so it’s great to hear it still rings for people, years later.

By: Riremima

Riremima — Sun, 12 Jul 2009 07:43:28 +0000

All of your RoyEd stories are exquisite, but this one really is the icing on the cake. I loved how you went into great detail, but at the same time didn’t; I feel it gave the reader a taste of what Edward was feeling, in how Roy was so good at distracting him. It wasn’t smut, and I would hardly even call it porn. I love the fluffier side of Roy and Ed, and although this fic was written with an angsty feel to it, I liked the nice balance you set out. I agree with V-Star’s comment, which has been there for a while, about the details pertaining to Ed [His defensive side]. And while this fic really focuses on Edward, I enjoyed reading the sections about Roy’s thoughts; It showed his sensitive and intuitive side very nicely.

I apologize if this comment is a little .. off-colored. It’s a bit late :]

By: Branch

Branch — Sun, 12 Apr 2009 15:07:14 +0000

Thanks, it’s good to hear you enjoyed it!

By: V-Star

V-Star — Sun, 12 Apr 2009 09:49:36 +0000

I really liked this. The only thing I would change about it if I could is that the piece seems to go out of it’s way not to get into the specific anatomical nitty gritty of the sex, which I think robs it of some feeling. Other than that, I really liked a lot of the little details, especially pertaining to Ed, who is often difficult to write when he’s defenseless. Nicely done.