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Overdetermined

After it’s over, Hiruma tries again to convince Kid of the value of wanting things. Written for Porn Battle, with the prompt: Hiruma/Kid, dreams. Drama with Porn, I-4, Spoilers for the Christmas Bowl match

Character(s): Hiruma Youichi, Kid
Pairing(s): Hiruma/Kid

The young man who was very careful to think of himself as Kid leaned against the wall and nodded at Hiruma’s arm. "How did you manage that, anyway?"

Hiruma grinned, all teeth. "It’s all in how much you want it." He wriggled his fingers at Kid, a bit taunting.

Kid snorted. Amazing how fast something turned into an old argument. "For some, I guess that works."

Hiruma pushed away from the wall and glared. "It works if you fucking stay with it. Are you going to spend your whole life half-assed?"

Kid looked away.

Hiruma’s growl didn’t surprise him, but the hand in his hair did, pulling him around and down to meet Hiruma’s mouth on his.

"You’re a fucking idiot and it drives me fucking crazy to watch." The words were muffled but fierce, fierce as the heat of Hiruma’s body against his.

Fierce but not careless. Hiruma was angled carefully away from Kid’s right side. It felt strange. Almost unbalanced. Not that he got much time to think about it.

"You need to want something, or how the hell do you tell you’re alive?" Hiruma’s fingers flicked open Kid’s pants and dove inside. His hand closed on Kid’s cock, long and competent, just like they closed on a ball. On a dart.

On a gun.

Kid couldn’t stifle the sound he made, and Hiruma’s mouth swallowed it, tasted it. Curved.

"I know you love it," Hiruma breathed against his ear. "Love knowing you’re this good. You wouldn’t be out here if you didn’t."

Kid’s good hand worked against Hiruma’s shoulder. "Just want to be with friends," he protested, husky.

"Then fight, damn it!" Hiruma’s fingers coaxed him and Hiruma’s voice shook him. "With us, for us, against us, it doesn’t fucking matter! That’s what we’re all out here for!" His mouth pressed against Kid’s throat, hot and wet. "All you have to do is want it hard enough and never fucking stop."

"It hurts," Kid whispered, head tilted back against the wall, eyes shut hard.

Hiruma’s hand tightened, stroked firmly, making heat climb Kid’s nerves. His voice was low. "That’s the only way to make it as good as it can be."

Kid groaned and hauled his arm out of the sling, pulling Hiruma tight against him. He could feel him laughing as he caught Hiruma’s mouth and kissed him back and pleasure wrung him out until the world wavered in front of his eyes.

The first thing he said, when he recovered enough breath, was, "Ow."

Hiruma was still laughing against his neck. "Yeah, well." He pushed away and rapped Kid lightly on the chest. "You ever want someone to play with, remember I’m here."

A helpless laugh shook Kid, and he pulled Hiruma back for another kiss, never mind the twinges.

Maybe he’d see how good it could get.

End

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Posted: Jun 19, 08
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7 Comments

  1. fantacination

    You have no idea how very long I despaired of ever finding this pairing! It’s been gnawing on me since the beach football chapter-episode. XDD; I liked how you handled their whole guns, determination, conviction dynamic between them and Hiruma’s vivid voice. Kid is so laid back that he probably is a bit of a challenge to present, but I think it was fine. 🙂

    Thankyou for writing this.♥

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    1. Icon for BranchBranch Post author

      Oh, thank you! *hearts* I have to say, I’ve had them in the back of my head for about that long too. ^_^ They’re just such a fascinating match in so many ways. I keep hoping they’ll give me more than little snippets like this!

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      1. fantacination

        XD I couldn’t agree more.♥ I find it VERY interesting that Hiruma actually admits that he thinks Kid is the best quarterback(manga). Ojou has the main rival slot but rather than Takami, Hiruma seems to spend more time with Kid. O_o The Wild Gunmans certainly manage to bump into the Devilbats a lot.♥ I want to make a drabble for them- and it’ll probably have something to do with guns (which I know next to nothing about) so I have no idea if the plotbunny will ever grow. ^^;

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        1. Icon for BranchBranch Post author

          Yes! And it seems to be Kid who’s helping him do all the /planning/ during the Christmas Bowl training. I loved that. I actually really like how everyone has heros/rivals from different teams. Shin for Sena, Kid for Hiruma, Banba and Gaou for Kurita, and, well, almost everyone for Monta. *grins*

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